Monthly Archives: September 2008

Teaching Tip: Teach With Baby Steps

 

Baby steps. That’s the best way to teach and the best way to learn. I began thinking about this when I read a quote by Samuel Johnson:

 

  • “The chief art of learning, as Locke has observed, is to attempt but little at a time. The widest excursions of the mind are made by short flights frequently repeated; the most lofty fabrics of science are formed by the continue accumulation of single propositions.”

 

I realized that breaking things down to the smallest possible component, then teaching that component, is how my students learn best. My first year as a teacher, I jumped right in and began teaching summary writing. I explained the process, the concept, the purpose, then gave them an assignment. Of course, the writing wasn’t what I had envisioned or hoped for. After that, the students had a mental block about summaries, and it took the entire year to teach them how to write one well. 

Now I begin at the very basic level of a sentence. First, we learn what a sentence is and how to write a good one. Next, we practice writing topic sentences for summaries. I model, model, model. I write them in green, and now we have green topic sentences on the walls of our room. 

Once we’ve mastered the topic sentence, we move on to the first transition. In the beginning, what happened? I make the students tell me what happened in two or three sentences. We write our transitions in blue. The first fact from the story is in yellow, and any details are in red

After mastering the topic sentence and beginning, we add transitions to the middle and the end. We write a perfect summary together as a class and post it on the wall. 

Finally, after we’ve done all of the above to excellence, we add a conclusion sentence. 

I no longer teach the summary as one whole project. I teach it in baby steps. Each little piece finally joins together into a magnificent whole. By the end of twelve weeks, my 4th grade students can write a summary that is succinct, clear, well organized, and cohesive. They are very proud of their new writing skill. 

Samuel Johnson was on to something when he said, “attempt but little at a time.” It makes a big project seem attainable, one baby step at a time.

Geist Literary Postcard Writing Contest

Fifth Annual Geist Literal Literary Postcard Contest

Entry Fee: $20

Deadline: November 1, 2008

Guidelines: http://www.geist.com/postcard-contest

Try to say the name of this contest three times fast. Seriously, this looks like a fun contest. Find a postcard picture to write about, write a flash fiction piece of up to 500 words about the postcard, and send it in to win cash or gifts. First prize is $250, second prize is $150, third prize is $100, and honorable mentions receive Geist gifts. The entries must be mailed to British Columbia, so if you’re mailing from the USA, you’ll want to give the postal service a couple of extra days.

Lilith Magazine Fiction Writing Contest

Lilith Magazine Sixth Annual Fiction Competition

Entry Fee: FREE

Deadline: November 1, 2008

Guidelines: http://www.lilith.org/writers.htm

Lilith Magazine publishes articles, poetry, and fiction that has to do with the female Jewish experience. All writing should shed light on modern Jewish women. According to their website, they are looking for “unpublished stories with heart, soul, and chutzpah.” Send them your manuscript, up to 3,000 words, for consideration. They also have a concurrent poetry contest with a deadline of November 30, 2008.

Travel Writing Contest

52PerfectDays.com Travel Writing Contest

Entry Fee: FREE

Deadline: October 31, 2008

Guidelines: http://www.52perfectdays.com/2008-travel-writing-contest

If you have a favorite place to visit, you can write about it and enter this contest. 52PerfectDays.com is looking for travel writing on little known destinations within the United States. In 750-1,000 words, describe your perfect itinerary for your favorite spot. The essay should not be a travelogue, but rather, a guide to the most enjoyable experience in that location. The website has very clear guidelines, so be sure to check them out.

Writing Tip: Using the Seductress Archetype

 

The vamp, the man hunter, the gold digger, whatever you call her, the seductress is a powerful female archetype. She is flexible, (and I do mean that metaphorically), so that she can be used in just about any character role. She makes an excellent villain, obviously, but used correctly, she can become a heroine your readers will love. My article, The Seductress Character Archetype  at Suite 101 gives a more in-depth analysis of how this archetype thinks and acts, and examples of seductress protagonists and antagonists. While you’re there, you might want to check out the Bad Boy Archetype  as well.

Like the picture? It’s by Clarita Natoli at Morguefile.

Call for Teacher Story Submissions

Adams Media publishes the Cup of Comfort books. This exclusive call for teacher stories is not listed on their website. They want true stories of your first year teaching that will inspire other teachers. The story can be humorous poignant, and should be between 850 and 1000 words. According to the call for submissions, the stories may be about:

 

- Facing the first day

- Meeting the students

- Surprising the students

- Bonding with faculty and staff

- Being surprised by the students

- Watching the students bloom

- Saying good-bye

Whichever topic you choose to write about should be inspiring. Submissions are due by September 30, 2008, so don’t waste any time on this one. Send your submission to:

Stephen D. Rodgers, Editor

My First Year in the Classroom

Stephen@stephendrodgers.com

Your submission should be in RTF format, (rich text file format) and the subject line of your email should include the word Submission. Payment is $100 and a copy of the anthology.

Writing Tip: Organizing Your Writing Ideas

Ideas are something that most writers have plenty of. You might see something on the street, overhear a piece of a conversation, or have an unusual experience. These all become writing fodder, and most writing reflects some of the writer’s experiences.

When you hear things, see things, or experience things that you don’t want to forget, what do you do? I carry a small notebook with me at all times, and I jot snippets of things I want to remember in it. The problem is what happens to these notes after I’ve written them. No matter how wonderful the ideas are, they become lost in the abyss of my office.

Scattered Notes

Some writers tell me they have notes all over their desks, on bulletin boards, in drawers, and scattered all about. Some writers try to organize their notes and file them. I tried that. Now, besides having notes all over my writing space, I have a folder stuffed full of writing ideas. I call it my idea dump, because it’s about as easy to find something in that folder as it would be to find it at the city dump. That system isn’t working, since the myriad notes become part of the landscape of my office, and the folder is filed in a drawer, sight unseen.

Category System

Here’s a system I recently found that might just work. It is to keep all your ideas in an accordion folder. You can sort them into categories. I’m going to try this. I’ll transfer my idea dump, and as many scattered notes as I can find, to an accordion folder with categories. My big categories will be:

  • Story ideas by genre
  • Conversation snippets
  • Setting snippets
  • Character snippets
  • Pictures

I need categories for pictures, because when I see a picture in a magazine or online that fits a character profile, or looks like a setting I want to use, I clip it and save it.

What do you do to organize ideas? I’d love to hear about them. I could really use some help finding that great idea I jotted down last week.

 

 

Teaching Tip: The Joyful Classroom

Joy in the classroom isn’t a term you often hear. In fact, many people think of drudgery, unpleasantness, or a twelve-year prison sentence when they think of school. Yet, with the right teachers, learning can be a joyful and satisfying experience. If you make your classroom a joyful place, both you and your students will have a rewarding time and good memories when the year is over.

The Teacher Sets the Tone

I always keep in mind that the teacher is the most important factor in the classroom atmosphere. It’s therefore important to create a kind environment in class. The students mirror my moods. If I am in a bad mood, the students will be grudging and hard to work with. They depend on me to determine how the day will go. So I follow the old adage of leaving your troubles at the door. Once I step into my room, I make a point of putting on a joyful attitude. Remarkably, this joy carries through to my social life when I leave school each day.

Create a Safe Environment

Students will put up an affective filter to protect themselves if they feel threatened or if they feel endangered by a lack of control. This filter can take many forms, anger, passive aggressiveness, acting out, sullenness, or inattentiveness to name a few. I make sure that my students know that tolerance is the most valued trait in my room. They must treat everyone with respect and care, and I lead by example. I also tell my students to come to me and talk to me if something I did upset them or embarrassed them. That way I can work with them to make it right.

Accept Imperfections

I set these goals for myself, but I’m not a perfect teacher, and I don’t always have perfect, joyful days in the classroom. In fact, this past Friday, I went home frustrated at one boy’s attitude in class. Then I realized that I hadn’t spoken to him much that day, except to remind him to be quiet. I realized my mistake, decided to correct it, and Monday, had a terrific day. I spent an extra couple of minutes checking in with my student and chatting with him. By letting him know I’m interested in him, he responded by having a great day. The smile on his face as he left that afternoon was a terrific change. Every day, I try to do little things that will make my students feel respected and safe, engaged and challenged, and those things keep my classroom joyful.

Writing Tip: Get to Know Your Characters

How do some writers make characters leap off the page and into our hearts? By making us get to know the characters so well that we love them or hate them.

To have a character that takes root in a reader’s heart, first he must take root in the writer’s heart. This can’t happen if we start writing with only a nebulous idea of who the character is or why he acts the way he does. We have to get to know the character almost better than we know ourselves. So how do we get to know our characters well enough to bring them to life?

Characterization worksheets can be found all over the Internet, and almost every writer has heard of them. They are the worksheets that ask for information like hair color, eye color, height, weight, home address. Yet that information gives you a driver’s license, not a character.

How do you describe your best friend? Do you list hair color, weight, and physical traits? Or do you name all the things about that person that make her who she is? For instance, a friend of mine jokes about everything, loves to window shop, loves to travel, and always wears platform shoes to make herself appear taller. That tells you more about her than a mere physical description.

Certainly the worksheet is helpful in creating the initial picture of the person in your mind, and for that reason I use one. But I do more than that. I sit down and have a confidential conversation with my characters. Here is my process.

 

  • First: I find a picture of a person that I think is what my character looks like. I hang this on my corkboard over my desk. Right now, Emmy is smiling back at me with her cocky grin and a hand on her hip. Tate is grinning proudly at me with a scar over his left eyebrow from the time he fell out of a tree when he was six.

 

  • Next: I fill out a characterization worksheet for each main character. Here is where I decide birthday, sun sign, birth order, family dynamics, and childhood traumas and successes.

 

  • Last: I interview my characters, one at a time. I ask what they think of other characters, why they plan on doing certain things, what are their hopes for the future.

This is when I get to know my characters’ voices. This is when hidden motivations are revealed. This is when I get to know the inner workings of each of their hearts and minds.

After I’ve done the interviews, I feel like I know my characters better than they know themselves. At this point, they are like real people to me. Armed with the information revealed through this process, my characters remain true to themselves and their motivations through the entire story or novel.

For information on the Bad Boy Character Archetype, see my Suite 101 page.

Teaching Tip: Back to School Night

Yes, it’s getting close to Back to School Night. For many teachers, it’s a nerve wracking time. We’re going to be meeting the parents who love the little angels we teach, and we want to make the best impression possible. Yet, with a little bit of planning, it can be smooth sailing.

At Back to School Night I let the parents know my goals for the school year, and I give them time to ask me questions. I also ask if anyone wants to volunteer in class, or has a special talent to share. Most of all, I try to open the way to forging a strong relationship that will help the parents unite with me to ensure their children get the best education possible. You may have other things you need to discuss. Every teacher handles it in a different way, but the basics are the same.

Here’s a checklist to help you get ready for the big night:

Three days ahead of time:

  • Have the students make invitations in class.

Two days ahead of time:

  • Start to clean up piles of papers, books, supplies, that are still sitting out. At my school, the supplies dribble in after the beginning of the year, so we always have boxes in our room the first few weeks.
  • Make a plan of what you want to say. Write it down on paper or index cards. Better yet, make a PowerPoint presentation. You can print notes handouts for the parents, and you can do a brief presentation, leaving plenty of time for conversation.

One day ahead of time:

  • Send a reminder home to the parents. Have the students plan on coming to Back to School Night. I offer a homework-free night if they come to Back to School night.
  • Practice your presentation, if you feel the need.

The Day of Back to School Night:

  • Have the students clean their desks. They can prepare a welcome note to their parents and leave it on their desks.
  • Clean your desk and straighten the shelves.
  • Set out some crackers and cheese or light snack for the parents. Some of them may be coming straight from work and be tired and hungry. A little food goes a long way toward creating goodwill.

Showtime!

  • Take a deep breath and relax.
  • Greet the parents at the door with a smile.
  • Make your presentation succinct and brief.
  • Give the parents time to ask you questions.
  • Enjoy getting to know them.