Monthly Archives: June 2010

Using Character Archetypes to Teach and Learn Writing

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So much has been said about creating memorable characters on the web, and there is no end to the different strategies to do that. Strong characters drive a strong plot and give the readers someone to connect with, positively or negatively.

Yet, even with all the worksheets, formulas, and psychological advice, a writer may still end up with a cardboard character. Why is that?

You can write all you want about your character’s outward appearance, family history, favorite foods, etcetera, but all that gives you is words on a paper. One of the best ways to learn how to breathe life into a character is to go back to basics. Way back to ancient basics.

Archetypes are Enduring Character Types

Character archetypes such as the Warrior, the Seductress, the Free Spirit, and the Adventurer, have endured years of literary use because they have deeply rooted qualities that anchor who they are.

The Warrior must fight to protect his honor, his family, and his land at all costs. Readers resonate with his loyalty and strength and follow him on his quests. The Seductress gains her power from manipulating others. Readers admire her beauty and as she uses her wiles, they may literally squirm with apprehension.

Character Archetypes Evoke Emotion

The reason these archetypes  work so well in fiction, and why they continue to endure from ancient epics to modern literature, is because they evoke strong emotions in the character. Studying these archetypes helps writers also learn how to evoke that same kind of emotion with their characters.

Here is a simple exercise to use with writing students or to do on your own.

Create a new character using one of the archetypes listed below. Once you’ve created a new character, put him or her into one of these situations.

  1. An armed man tries to rob the bank while your character is standing in line.
  2. An older woman falls and breaks her leg in the park where your character is jogging.
  3. The power inexplicably goes out in the office building where your character works.
  4. Your character runs into a person he thought he killed two months ago.

Have fun with the exercise. The results may lead to a new story.

Classic Character Archetypes and Their Qualities

This is a list of a few of the more well known and recognized archetypes. They are linked to articles describing their qualities and giving examples of how they have been used in fiction and movies.

Happy writing!

Steampunk Anthology Now Open to Submissions

Deadline: July 14, 2010

Payment: 1 print copy of the anthology

Guidelines: http://www.sonar4publications.com/steam.html

Sonar4 Publications needs quality steampunk stories for a new anthology slated for Fall 2010. Payment is low, but if steampunk is your style, then it might be a way to start gaining an audience. They’re looking for stories 1000 to 5000 words long that are original and unpublished.

If you’re not sure what steampunk is, these two articles might shed a little steam powered light on the subject.

Why Retro Future Worlds of Steampunk Fiction Need Brass Goggles

Five Ways to Hop on the Steampunk Writing Train

As a quick rundown, steampunk is a fun form of scifi/fantasy that entails plenty of cogs, gears, wheels, steam power, and dirigibles. It most often is set in the Victorian era, however, that isn’t a hard and fast rule. If nothing else, the stories are fun to read and write just for the sake of the cool gadgets. Think Wild, Wild, West, and you’re on the right track to Steampunkville.

Cherie Priest’s Boneshaker just won the Locus Award, and you can read excerpts of the novel at Amazon.

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Smashcake Magazine Open to Submissions

Smashcake Magazine is a new, twice yearly print magazine currently looking for fiction to fill its pages. The fiction may be any genre, any tone, and any length. However, if your story is very long, you may want to -mail the editors to ask about that. Since there are no previous issues to purview, what will rock the editors’ worlds is anyone’s guess. Just dive in and see what comes out on top.

The first issue of Smashcake Magazine will premiere in Fall 2010, available now for pre-order at the price of $8. They are paying writers $2 per piece, not much, but I’m just letting you know.

If you happen to get published in Smashcake Magazine, you can give a shout out here, and hopefully some readers will be excited for you and buy a copy of the magazine.

Submission guidelines for Smashcake Magazine

Authonomy by HarperCollins Creates New Model in Book Industry

Novel writers are painfully aware of the long, slow, and intimidating process of researching agents, sending out query letters with a perfect pitch, and waiting.

And waiting.

And waiting.

The process can take weeks, months, sometimes even longer.

On the other end of the spectrum, agents have tidal waves of queries to surf through, searching for the next bright star in the publishing industry. HarperCollins decided to try a new model of this process, an innovative way of uncovering new talent. It’s worked well enough so far that they received a Bookseller Industry Award for Digital Innovation, as blurbed on their blog. They’re calling it Authonomy.

Here’s how it works:

  1. Author joins the Authonomy community.
  2. Author uploads a minimum of 10,000 words of a (hopefully completed) novel.
  3. Author reads and rates other novels on the site.
  4. Novels are ranked according to readers’ ratings.
  5. Once a month, editors from HarperCollins review the five top rated novels.
  6. In a perfect world, one or more of those authors might get a publishing contract.

According to Authonomy, authors do not give up any rights to their work, which was my first worry. They are free to continue querying and submitting to other agents and publishing houses while the novel is online.

It’s a new model in an old business, and it may just turn the industry protocol sideways. Only time will tell. Take a visit and see what you think. If you upload a novel, leave a comment here, so blog readers can traipse on over there and give you a rating.

Here’s the URL for Authonomy by HarperCollins: http://authonomy.com

Reading Writers Intense Suspense Contest

Deadline: September 15, 2010 at midnight ET

Entry fee: FREE

Guidelines: http://www.readingwriters.com/contest.htm

Innocent victim. Evil entity. Dead cell phone. 1,500 words.

Can you do it? Can you write a story with these elements that will keep readers on the edge of their seats, gasping for breath, unable to sleep for fear of the nightmares your story will induce?

Yes, you say? Then send that story in to the Intense Suspense contest and see if you can win $100 and get published.

Reading Writers, publishers of The Verb, regularly run writing contests for short stories. The winning entry is published, along with a story opinion by the judge, Elizabeth Guy. Authors of stories that don’t win may order a story opinion.

Good luck, and happy writing!

Writeoncon Online Conference

Summer is the time for conferences. It’s when many of us can get away from the day job to spend a few lavish days with other writers, editors, and agents. It’s when we can sit in the hotel bar networking all night. It’s when we can pitch our novels in person to the agent of our dreams.

Or not.

Because if you can’t get off work, can’t afford the spendy cost of a national conference, or don’t have anyone to watch the kids, then you probably won’t be attending a national conference.

That’s where Writeoncon comes in to save the day.

Seven writers got together, and in a spirit of giving and mentoring, decided to create a writer’s conference online. Now everyone can attend. They have a line-up of prestigious agents, writers, and other folks, and from the looks of this video, it should be a fun experience.

Check it out. My blog host doesn’t allow me to embed a video, (yes, I should really change hosts, but that’s a ton of work to move everything,) here is the URL. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kgITsK3rybk&feature=player_embedded

Even though the conference is online, it’s still a good idea to brush up on your writer’s conference etiquette. Things like not stalking agents in the bathroom. Although that might be a bit hard to do online. But you definitely want to be prepared to meet other writers and agents and be able to pitch your work.

I’ll be there. I’m looking forward to meeting you there.

To get more info, straight from the source, head over to Writeoncon.