Category Archives: Teaching

Best of the Blogs in #amwriting #writetips #yalit #teaching

Here are some of the posts by remarkable writers I’ve found for you this week from @suzannelilly. Here’s a listing in case you missed any of them on Twitter.

The Craft of Writing

Here’s the thing about independent editors… http://wp.me/ppJnZ-1KK via @behlerpublish #amediting

The 21 Best Tips for Writing Your Opening Scene  http://wp.me/pVquh-jH Another good one to bookmark. #amwriting #amediting

26 Tricks to Keep Readers Reading http://wp.me/pVquh-jQ I bookmarked this one. #amwriting #amediting

SEO and Social Media for Teachers and Writers

Writer’s Cramp: In the E-Reader Era, a Book a Year Is Slacking http://www.nytimes.com/2012/05/13/business/in-e-reader-age-of-writers-cramp-a-book-a-year-is-slacking.html #amwriting

Fun Posts

#MyPastRelationships Taught Me This.http://pic.twitter.com/fb4uTgXE

While cruising Youtube, mostly to watch the Lizzie Bennet Diaries, (love those!) I came across the cutest video I’ve ever seen about a puppy and kitty in love. The dog has the most endearing expressions! It’s only a minute. Check it out here at the Honey Creek Books blog.


Best of the Blogs in #amwriting #writetips #yalit #teaching

I’ve tweeted bunches of great posts for you this week from @suzannelilly. Here’s a listing in case you missed any of them.

Young Adult Lit

That was a fabulous article. The YA Genre is Killing Itself http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/the-ya-genre-is-killing-itself #yalit #amwriting #fiction

The Craft of Writing

Watch this video! You Don’t Publish a Book, You Give Birth To It http://bit.ly/Hbt2RC #amwriting #bookbinding I loved this video of a reminder of how involved book publishing can be.

Have you read less than stellar #indie book? Where selfpub gets quality control, by @dirtywhitecandy http://tinyurl.com/83yrqqb #pubtips

A follow up to my #indie selfpub tweet: Vetting the Independent Editor. http://tinyurl.com/7sjmnob @writerbeware #pubtips

Character development: examples and practice from @StinaLL on the @querytracker blog. http://tinyurl.com/7gjb6nk #amwriting

SEO and Social Media for Teachers and Writers

How to create a coverphoto for your FB timeline. by @authormedia #SEO #techtips http://tinyurl.com/7oenhwh #amwriting

Headlines and Hooklines: Writing the Press Release @querytracker http://tinyurl.com/6q35czx #pubtips #writetips

Writing and Teaching Resources

You don’t have to be super smart to be super successful according to a Forbes article. http://tinyurl.com/797a2md #success

Best article I’ve read about e-book pricing. http://behlerblog.com/2012/05/07/e-book-pricing-what-are-you-worth/ From @behlerpublish #pubtips #ebooks #amwriting

Fun Posts

How do you dress your MC? Great post on designing characters. http://tinyurl.com/74vd4pz #amwriting #writetips

Mother’s Day #craft ideas for the #classroom. http://tinyurl.com/de4c2z #teaching

Best of the Blogs in #amwriting #writetips #yalit #teaching

I’ve tweeted bunches of great posts for you this week from @suzannelilly. Here’s a listing in case you missed any of them.

Teaching Tips

Candid advice on how to keep students engaged. http://tinyurl.com/cvzcmbs #teaching From Chronicle of Higher Ed.

Like Water for Horses: Why Even Good Students Don’t Do Multiple Drafts http://tinyurl.com/6r72keq #teaching #writing

The Craft of Writing

Six kinds of writers: Which one are you? On @querytracker blog.http://tinyurl.com/6nqvq8e #writetips #amwriting

Save your novel! Write yourself a 5 star review. by @dirtywhitecandy http://tinyurl.com/7a6agto #amwriting #amediting

5 stellar tips from a NYT bestselling author http://tinyurl.com/72yj4bq #amwriting #writetips #NYT

SEO and Social Media for Teachers and Writers

Why no one links to your best posts & what to do about it. via @copyblogger http://tinyurl.com/65gekp #blogger #amwriting

How to be agressive and not obnoxious in publishing by @bob_mayer tinyurl.com/789zphz #pubtips #writetips #amwriting

Writing and Teaching Resources

If you’re writing Celtic, here’s a resource article of Clan MacGregor. Great info! http://tinyurl.com/6t92xqu #amwriting #historical

Fun Posts

The Jump Project. Photos of, well, jumps. These photos rock!http://wp.me/p3xeT-DQ #jumpproject #storystarters #teenreads

Some of the best book titles that are the worst ever. Have a giggle when you read this list. http://tinyurl.com/7slvffh #nonfiction

Did you know…A hippo can open its mouth wide enough to fit a 4 foot tall child inside! (Don’t try this at home) From @jessfortunato author of The Sin Collector. #YAlit

The Figurative Language of Simile and Metaphor: Which is Which?

Telling the difference between simile and metaphor isn’t as hard as you think. Why should we care? Simile and metaphor create imagery, a mental picture that makes our message clear to our readers. Figurative language isn’t just for poetry. It’s used in fiction and nonfiction. It can be especially helpful when explaining and writing about difficult concepts in the sciences.

When I teach figurative language to students, I make things as simple as possible. There is one short rule to help you remember how to tell if something is a simile or a metaphor.

  • Similes use” like” or “as” and metaphors do not.

That’s it! Now let’s have a bit of explanation and examples.

Structure of a Simile

Similes compare two things using the words “like” or “as.” Here are some examples:

  • Her smile is like a ray of sunshine.
  • Her acne is like a volcanic eruption.
  • Her sarcasm is as sharp as a porcupine’s quills.

What Makes a Metaphor?

A metaphor also compares two things, but it states that one thing is another. One well known example:

  • She is a thorn in my side.

Obviously, a person can’t be a thorn. The metaphor describes the pain and annoyance she causes.

More examples of common metaphors:

  • The sun is a big, round pizza pie.
  • The steak is shoe leather.
  • That boy is an eating machine.

In all of these examples, one thing is said to be another. That’s a metaphor.

Combination Figurative Language

Some descriptions combine both metaphor and simile. For example:

  • The boy eats like a horse but he is a bean pole.

Do you feel like an expert now? Here’s a short figurative language quiz to test your knowledge.

State if you think these are simile or metaphor. I’ll put the answers at the end of the post, so don’t peek till you’re ready to see if you got them right.

  1. Ugly as a monkey’s armpit. (This expression inspired a book title I wrote about on another blog.)
  2. He peeled out like a banana.
  3. Her face was as red as a baboon’s butt. (Credit for this one goes to one of my former students.)
  4. His car is a trash bin on wheels, spilling its contents whenever he opens a door.
  5. Her father is Silly Putty in her hands.
  6. The kelp is a graceful ballerina in the ocean current.

In review, simile and metaphor are both forms of figurative language that create imagery, or a mental picture, in a reader’s mind. They both compare two or more things. Similes use the words “like” or “as” and metaphors say one thing “is” another thing.

To use one last clichéd simile, I hope this helped make things as clear as a bell. Do you have any original similes or metaphors to share?

Answers to the quiz: 1-3 are similes, 4-6 are metaphors.

Keeping the Faith in Fiction

Fiction S-Z (a sequel)

Image by Mrs Logic via Flickr

I’ve been hearing alarming rumors about where fiction in schools is headed. The first time I heard it, I shook it off. The second time I heard it, I gave it a short thought before shaking it off. Then I heard it again and again. Finally, on Friday, when it was mentioned yet another time, I gave it a bit more thought, and it unnerved me.

As you know, I’m a teacher. I teach 10-12 year old children to calculate, to read, to write, and to express themselves well orally and in writing. I do this through science, art, practice, games, and the mandated curriculum. I require my students to read 40 books a year, in a variety of genres, which works out to just over one book a week, because I believe excellent reading ability is the foundation of a meaningful education.

Think back to your own reading habits when you were a child. Did you read for information? Did you read for an escape from reality? Did you read to learn about faraway places? Did you read to learn how to solve problems and find justice and truth in the world?

All of those reasons are equally valid reasons for reading. Yet, rumor in educational circles has it, that after third grade students no longer need to focus on fiction, because as adults, the majority of their reading will be in the nonfiction areas.

Is Fiction Being Taken Out of Schools?

The current trend in education is to feed students morsels of facts, then have them regurgitate those morsels on a standardized test in the form of bubbles filled with graphite on paper. In rare cases, students are required to use the facts to come to a new conclusion, which would require digesting the information and using it in a new way.

The new common core standards have a focus on nonfiction more than fiction. This means that many of our textbooks will have less fiction selections, and more nonfiction articles. If this rumor turns out to be true, in my opinion, it will be a great loss to our culture. Not only have we lost the performing arts from many of our schools, now we might be losing a large part of our written art.

What Purpose Does Fiction Serve?

Nonfiction is absolutely essential to a child’s education. So is fiction. How else will a child be able to read a book that helps him to realize he’s not alone in his situation? Where else but fiction can a child escape a brutal reality into a fantasy world where dreams do come true? How else will children learn the nuances of language and shaded meanings of expressions they encounter in good literature?

I’m not blaming anyone for this, nor do I want to get into a political discussion about NCLB or CCSS. All I’m saying is that I see a trend that I find disturbing. The students in my classes love reading. Even though they may choose anything for their personal reading, most of them choose fiction. It serves a deep need for young people to make meaning of the world and experiences. How will they do that without fiction to help?

As a writer of both fiction and nonfiction, I’m still keeping the faith in fiction. Both types of writing are necessary, and both types of writing are important to readers. I’m asking this question of fiction writers because we’re the ones promoting fiction, and I’m asking readers, because you’re the ones doing the reading, obviously.

What do you think? Should more of an emphasis be put on nonfiction, leaving fiction for the primary grades? Or do you think fictional literature is an important part of a full education? Please leave a comment with your thoughts.

But before you answer, read and listen to this post about why biographies matter, from the Tempered Radical, to see the other side of the coin.

The Versatile Blogger Award

Thanks to kenziekay, I’m happy be a recipient of this lovely blog award and to pass it on to fifteen more lovely bloggers. Before passing it along, I must tell you seven facts about myself. Since I shared seven random facts last week, when I received the Irresistibly Sweet Blog Award, I’ll need to dig deep for seven more.

Here it goes. I’ll keep them short.

  1. Pickles are one of my favorite foods. My favorite field trip as a kid was to a pickle factory.
  2. I am an avid supporter of the Oxford comma.
  3. I follow the Dalai Lama on Facebook.
  4. Yoga was at first a therapy for me, then became a permanent part of my life.
  5. I still watch Survivor.
  6. I used to play the banjo, the piano, and the guitar.
  7. I once killed a black widow spider on a wall with a Taekwondo kick. (Martial arts training came in handy that day. My students were suitably impressed and behaved the rest of the week.)

Drum roll please. Ratatatatatat! The Versatile Blogger Award this week goes to:

LouCinda McGary, Jansen Schmidt, Cathy C. Hall, Jennifer Anderson, Dawn Montgomery, Julie Glover, Julie Anne Lindsey, Bridgette Booth, VB Tremper, Ruth J. Hartman, Ryan King, Gene Lempp, Kristin Connor, Juliana Haygert, and Tia Bach. Congrats to you all.

Rules for the Versatile Blogger Award:

  • Write 7 facts about yourself.
  • Pass the award on to 15 other bloggers you admire and respect.

See you again with the #ROW80 updates on Wednesdays and Sundays.

Irresistibly Sweet Blog Award

Thanks so much to Sonya Weiss, an inspiring blogger and fellow writer, who sent me this wonderful award. First, I had to learn to spell it. Is the suffix ibly or ably?

Then, I had to drool on the picture. (Don’t worry, I wiped the image clean.)

Strawberry shortcake, Irresistibly sweet awardNext, I must tell you seven random facts about me, things you never realized you wanted to know.

  1. I love, love, love, strawberries and cream. (That’s why the picture got droolie.)
  2. I love, love, love, writing in bed. (Sounds, kinky, I know. I’m typing in bed right now.) Something about having a nice warm quilt around me as I sit criss-cross applesauce helps the words flow faster.
  3. One of my first jobs was as a hotel maid. I lasted two weeks. Someone told me I would get tips, and I believed them. (Gullible me.) No amount of tips will make up for that kind of work. No love, love, love, here.
  4. I love, love, love, swimming. I once fell asleep in a swimming pool, underwater, breathing with a snorkel. Impossible? No. The story is true.
  5. I love, love, love, baseball. Once, when my hubby and I were at a RiverCats game, one of my students was interviewed on the big screen and won a prize. The next day, I told him, “Jimmy, I saw you at the game.” He said, “Let me know if you ever want to sit in our box seats with us, Mrs. Pitner.” Suh-weet!
  6. When my children were little, I worked at home for a designer, sewing tropical skirts and camisoles. I used to love, love, love, sewing, but that experience, with crushing deadlines and massive amounts of work, took some of the joy away.
  7. My first labor was a total of one and one half hours long. Don’t be angry at me. The next two weren’t nearly as breezy. In fact, during my last labor, I came to understand how women die in childbirth. I had an emergency c-section, and told my husband, “No more kids for you, buddy!” To which he fervently agreed. I love, love, love, that guy.

Thanks again to the irresistibly sweet Sonya Weiss for giving me this award. Here are my nominations of ten more fabulous bloggers.

LouCinda McGary, Jansen Schmidt, Cathy C. Hall, Jennifer Anderson, Dawn Montgomery, Julie Glover, Julie Anne Lindsey, Bridgette Booth, VB Tremper, and kenziekay. Congratulations all of you! You brighten my days.

Rules for the Irresistibly Sweet Blog Award:

  • Post 7 random facts about yourself.
  • Pass the award on to 10 more wonderful bloggers.

See you on Wednesday and Sundays for my #ROW80 updates!

Let’s Put the Value Back in Reading and Writing

A former student of mine came to visit me after school one day.

“I’ll bet you can’t remember who I am!” he dared me.

Remarkably, I did remember this young man. Quite well, in fact. He’d made an impression on me with his cheerful attitude and complete disregard for his schoolwork.

“Of course I remember you.” As I said his name, his face lit up in the long shadows of the fall afternoon. We had a conversation about the new school he attended and his hobbies. He asked if one of the other teachers he’d had still worked at the school.

“Yes, but she’s changed rooms,” I told him. “I’ll walk you over there so you can pay her a visit.”

When we arrived at her room, she was in a meeting. I handed my student a pencil and paper and said, “Why don’t you write her a note and tell her you stopped by to see her?”

A panicky expression crossed his face, quickly replaced by a smile. “Oh, I don’t know.”

“She’d love to hear from you,” I encouraged him, pushing the writing implements toward him.

He shuffled his feet, put his hands in his pockets and asked, “Could you write it for me?”

That’s when I realized this student couldn’t write. He was unable to write a friendly note telling someone he’d stopped by their room.

“What’s going on?” I asked. “Why aren’t you able to write this note?”

“I’m just too busy with sports and family stuff to read and write,” he said. “And I just can’t keep up in school.”

Sadly, this is not an uncommon occurrence.

Child reading at Brookline Booksmith

Image from Wikimedia Commons

Why Aren’t our Students Reading and Writing?

In a country full of the written language, why is it that so many of our students are functionally illiterate? How can we expect them to perform at high levels of complex reading and writing when they can’t even read a magazine? Most important, why is this happening?

Certainly in this era when it’s fashionable to blame the teachers, it’s easy to say the schools aren’t doing their job of teaching literacy. But is it really as simple as that? Let’s take a look at our culture.

We pride ourselves on being busy and active, accomplishing something all the time. When you ask a co-worker what he or she did on a weekend, and they tell you about hiking, biking, volunteering, or some other activity, you probably engage in more conversation about it. But if a co-worker says “I read all weekend,” do they get the same recognition? No. In fact, some people have the attitude that reading is what you do when there’s nothing else to do. People feel sorry for the SOBs who don’t have anything to do on the weekend but read a good book.

Case in point: An employee who is recuperating from surgery is begging to come back to work early, because he’s bored. He’s says there is nothing to do all day but read.

Hmm.

Putting Value on Reading and Writing

If you’re reading this, you’re a literate person. You probably put in many hours of reading and writing outside of school. You probably wrote letters and emails. You’ve carried these virtues forward into adulthood.

You understand the value of reading and writing.

Let’s get that back for everyone. Let’s promote reading after school and on weekends. Let’s promote writing friendly letters and emails without textspeak, letters to companies, letters to our representatives. This all takes time. Which means we might need to slow our lives down a bit, cut back on some of our children’s extracurricular activities.

Teachers can teach children to read and write, but the way they learn to use these skills is by practice. Practice in school is not enough. They need hours more practice reading and writing to master them.

Let’s slow things down and give them  time. Time to read, time to write, time to become literate. Let’s put the value back in literacy.

Articles in L.A. Times are Changing the View of Standardized Test Scores

Classroom image

Photo/Suzanne Pitner

A series of articles written by Jason Felch and Jason Song of the L.A. Times has brought to light data about effective teachers that has never before been shared with the public.

Using a statistical analysis, they’ve looked at the standardized test scores for the L.A. Unified School District, and come up with a way to see which teachers are having the most impact on their students in any given year. By looking at past test scores for a student, one can predict about how well to expect that student to perform on the state tests in the Spring. When a student scores higher than expected, the “value-added” or increase, would indicate an effective teacher. If the student scores less than predicted, the teacher is considered less than effective.

This analysis is not something to be used as a complete evaluation of teacher performance. The Times reporters acknowledge that divorce, death in a family, and other factors may cause a student to do poorly one year, even with a very effective teacher. However, if a teacher routinely has classes that lose ground, year after year, then there may be a problem.

The most effective teachers were found in all schools of the district, from the most poor, to the most affluent. Teaching strategies and styles were widely diverse, with only a few things found in common. The most effective teachers tended to be strict with classroom management, have high expectations, challenged all students, and encouraged critical thinking. Notably, they were not teaching to the test.

Some union leaders have decried the revealing of teachers and state test scores. Others have said it can be a way to identify effective teachers and find what they’re doing that works, using that information to improve teaching methodology. What do you think? Click the link below to read the articles and share your opinion.

L.A. Times Grading the Teachers: Value-Added Analysis

Day in the Life of a Teacher: Back to School Edition

So just what do teachers do to get ready for school? This video may enlighten you.