Category Archives: Writing Tips

Best of the Blogs in #amwriting #writetips #yalit #teaching

Here are some of the posts by remarkable writers I’ve found for you this week from @suzannelilly. Here’s a listing in case you missed any of them on Twitter.

The Craft of Writing

Here’s the thing about independent editors… http://wp.me/ppJnZ-1KK via @behlerpublish #amediting

The 21 Best Tips for Writing Your Opening Scene  http://wp.me/pVquh-jH Another good one to bookmark. #amwriting #amediting

26 Tricks to Keep Readers Reading http://wp.me/pVquh-jQ I bookmarked this one. #amwriting #amediting

SEO and Social Media for Teachers and Writers

Writer’s Cramp: In the E-Reader Era, a Book a Year Is Slacking http://www.nytimes.com/2012/05/13/business/in-e-reader-age-of-writers-cramp-a-book-a-year-is-slacking.html #amwriting

Fun Posts

#MyPastRelationships Taught Me This.http://pic.twitter.com/fb4uTgXE

While cruising Youtube, mostly to watch the Lizzie Bennet Diaries, (love those!) I came across the cutest video I’ve ever seen about a puppy and kitty in love. The dog has the most endearing expressions! It’s only a minute. Check it out here at the Honey Creek Books blog.


Maggi Anderson, Author of Murder in Devon, on her Writing and her Writing Space

On my blog today for the Writers’ Room series, I have Maggi Anderson, the author of the mystery novel Murder in Devon, which I reviewed last week. This week, she’s here to talk to us about her writing space, how she gets things done, and to give away a free copy of her book.

I’m hoping for this to be a fun and friendly way for readers and writers to get to know a little more about you. So let your hair down and have fun answering the questions!

 Please tell us a little about yourself. What types of things do you write?

I am an Australian writer of historical romance, mysteries and young adult novels. My historical romances take place in the Georgian, Regency and Victorian eras. Most of my books are set in England apart from two about the Australian outback.

Do you have a schedule for writing?

I begin after breakfast, dealing with email and promotional commitments. Before lunch I do the necessary housework, catch up on any important reading or research. In the afternoon I visit the gym, and swim in the summer months. I then work on my current manuscript until six o’clock. Late afternoon seems to be the time my muse is present.

Do you have any writing rituals, such as music, food, clothes, or anything else to help you?

Copious cups of tea and coffee and comfortable clothes, like a tracksuit suit me best. Sometimes television can help sort out a plot point or deepen a character’s motivation. It usually comes from out of the blue and is quite a mysterious process.  As if my brain has been sorting it out without my noticing. Music can be energizing and get me in the right mood, but I don’t tend to use it a lot. I find singing distracting.

Who or what is your inspiration?

I’m inspired by good writing; by an intriguing concept; or even just an image.  I saw a neo-Nazi rally on the television news and thought, what if? That’s how Murder in Devon began.

Could you tell us about your writer’s space?

I have a study nook off the kitchen, a step away from tea and coffee making facilities. My cat, Africa, a champagne Persian, graces me with her company, leaning on the keyboard and creating chaos. I don’t have the heart to tell her to leave.

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We live in the Southern Highlands of New South Wales, Australia. The view from my window is of majestic trees often filled with sulpher-crested cockatoos Maggi_Anderson_ducksand colorful parrots. Wild ducks inhabit the creek at the bottom of the garden. It changes with the seasons, which I love. Autumn is my favorite; the Himalayan dogwood tree turns a glorious rich crimson and the towering elm turns to gold.

Do you have anything else you’d like to tell us?

Murder in Devon is a murder mystery set in Devon, England. It’s a mystery/ romantic suspense which has been garnering some great reviews.  You can read about them on my blog: http://www.maggiandersen.blogspot.com

Murder in Devon is available in print and on Amazon kindle

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Maggi Anderson Author website

 Last of all, what advice would you give to other writers?

Some writers have instant success with their first novel. But for most of us, and me included, it takes years to become published.  Although with self-publishing and e-book companies springing up, it’s easier to get your novel published in some form. My advice would be not to rush it. Give yourself time to learn your craft and discover your voice. Polish your work and make it as perfect as you can.  Take the time to plan your career and set yourself up with a good website or blog, so readers will become familiar with your work.  Be patient, and don’t give up.

Thanks so much, Maggi, for taking the time to talk to us. If you’d like to read Murder in Devon for free, just leave a comment with your email or other contact information in it.

Best of the Blogs in #amwriting #writetips #yalit #teaching

I’ve tweeted bunches of great posts for you this week from @suzannelilly. Here’s a listing in case you missed any of them.

Young Adult Lit

That was a fabulous article. The YA Genre is Killing Itself http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/the-ya-genre-is-killing-itself #yalit #amwriting #fiction

The Craft of Writing

Watch this video! You Don’t Publish a Book, You Give Birth To It http://bit.ly/Hbt2RC #amwriting #bookbinding I loved this video of a reminder of how involved book publishing can be.

Have you read less than stellar #indie book? Where selfpub gets quality control, by @dirtywhitecandy http://tinyurl.com/83yrqqb #pubtips

A follow up to my #indie selfpub tweet: Vetting the Independent Editor. http://tinyurl.com/7sjmnob @writerbeware #pubtips

Character development: examples and practice from @StinaLL on the @querytracker blog. http://tinyurl.com/7gjb6nk #amwriting

SEO and Social Media for Teachers and Writers

How to create a coverphoto for your FB timeline. by @authormedia #SEO #techtips http://tinyurl.com/7oenhwh #amwriting

Headlines and Hooklines: Writing the Press Release @querytracker http://tinyurl.com/6q35czx #pubtips #writetips

Writing and Teaching Resources

You don’t have to be super smart to be super successful according to a Forbes article. http://tinyurl.com/797a2md #success

Best article I’ve read about e-book pricing. http://behlerblog.com/2012/05/07/e-book-pricing-what-are-you-worth/ From @behlerpublish #pubtips #ebooks #amwriting

Fun Posts

How do you dress your MC? Great post on designing characters. http://tinyurl.com/74vd4pz #amwriting #writetips

Mother’s Day #craft ideas for the #classroom. http://tinyurl.com/de4c2z #teaching

Best of the Blogs in #amwriting #writetips #yalit #teaching

I’ve tweeted bunches of great posts for you this week from @suzannelilly. Here’s a listing in case you missed any of them.

Teaching Tips

Candid advice on how to keep students engaged. http://tinyurl.com/cvzcmbs #teaching From Chronicle of Higher Ed.

Like Water for Horses: Why Even Good Students Don’t Do Multiple Drafts http://tinyurl.com/6r72keq #teaching #writing

The Craft of Writing

Six kinds of writers: Which one are you? On @querytracker blog.http://tinyurl.com/6nqvq8e #writetips #amwriting

Save your novel! Write yourself a 5 star review. by @dirtywhitecandy http://tinyurl.com/7a6agto #amwriting #amediting

5 stellar tips from a NYT bestselling author http://tinyurl.com/72yj4bq #amwriting #writetips #NYT

SEO and Social Media for Teachers and Writers

Why no one links to your best posts & what to do about it. via @copyblogger http://tinyurl.com/65gekp #blogger #amwriting

How to be agressive and not obnoxious in publishing by @bob_mayer tinyurl.com/789zphz #pubtips #writetips #amwriting

Writing and Teaching Resources

If you’re writing Celtic, here’s a resource article of Clan MacGregor. Great info! http://tinyurl.com/6t92xqu #amwriting #historical

Fun Posts

The Jump Project. Photos of, well, jumps. These photos rock!http://wp.me/p3xeT-DQ #jumpproject #storystarters #teenreads

Some of the best book titles that are the worst ever. Have a giggle when you read this list. http://tinyurl.com/7slvffh #nonfiction

Did you know…A hippo can open its mouth wide enough to fit a 4 foot tall child inside! (Don’t try this at home) From @jessfortunato author of The Sin Collector. #YAlit

The Figurative Language of Simile and Metaphor: Which is Which?

Telling the difference between simile and metaphor isn’t as hard as you think. Why should we care? Simile and metaphor create imagery, a mental picture that makes our message clear to our readers. Figurative language isn’t just for poetry. It’s used in fiction and nonfiction. It can be especially helpful when explaining and writing about difficult concepts in the sciences.

When I teach figurative language to students, I make things as simple as possible. There is one short rule to help you remember how to tell if something is a simile or a metaphor.

  • Similes use” like” or “as” and metaphors do not.

That’s it! Now let’s have a bit of explanation and examples.

Structure of a Simile

Similes compare two things using the words “like” or “as.” Here are some examples:

  • Her smile is like a ray of sunshine.
  • Her acne is like a volcanic eruption.
  • Her sarcasm is as sharp as a porcupine’s quills.

What Makes a Metaphor?

A metaphor also compares two things, but it states that one thing is another. One well known example:

  • She is a thorn in my side.

Obviously, a person can’t be a thorn. The metaphor describes the pain and annoyance she causes.

More examples of common metaphors:

  • The sun is a big, round pizza pie.
  • The steak is shoe leather.
  • That boy is an eating machine.

In all of these examples, one thing is said to be another. That’s a metaphor.

Combination Figurative Language

Some descriptions combine both metaphor and simile. For example:

  • The boy eats like a horse but he is a bean pole.

Do you feel like an expert now? Here’s a short figurative language quiz to test your knowledge.

State if you think these are simile or metaphor. I’ll put the answers at the end of the post, so don’t peek till you’re ready to see if you got them right.

  1. Ugly as a monkey’s armpit. (This expression inspired a book title I wrote about on another blog.)
  2. He peeled out like a banana.
  3. Her face was as red as a baboon’s butt. (Credit for this one goes to one of my former students.)
  4. His car is a trash bin on wheels, spilling its contents whenever he opens a door.
  5. Her father is Silly Putty in her hands.
  6. The kelp is a graceful ballerina in the ocean current.

In review, simile and metaphor are both forms of figurative language that create imagery, or a mental picture, in a reader’s mind. They both compare two or more things. Similes use the words “like” or “as” and metaphors say one thing “is” another thing.

To use one last clichéd simile, I hope this helped make things as clear as a bell. Do you have any original similes or metaphors to share?

Answers to the quiz: 1-3 are similes, 4-6 are metaphors.

Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #Writing and #Amwriting

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my Twitter feed. Bookmark this page so you can read them at your leisure.

Writing Inspiration/Motivation

Fab post on Why I Love Being A Writer by @GeneLempphttp://wp.me/p1bz5t-f1 via @kaitnolan #ROW80 #amwriting

How to write a cookbook by accident. http://tinyurl.com/7k7c8x4 @judyalter #recipes #amwriting

My interview with Jess Fortunato. This author has an amazing website that’s a great model for other #fictionwriters. http://t.co/U59bqTmD#amwriting #writetips

Learn the Craft of Writing

Creating Believable Characters With Personality http://michelle-wright.suite101.com/creating-believable-characters-with-personality-a406410 by Michelle Wright #writetips #amwriting #fiction

Teaching Writing and Reading

Great ideas for Gulliver’s Travels Lesson Plans http://angela-k.suite101.com/gullivers-travels-lesson-plan-ideas-a401013 by Angela Kleinow. #teaching #teachlit

Odds ‘n’ Ends

Money for nothing & your speech for free. How low some sites go. http://tinyurl.com/7j5mfxm #speechwriting #amwriting

A #fanfic author’s kindergarten beginnings. Or, how to raise an author. http://tinyurl.com/6wranvp @JulieALindsey #amwriting #mglit

Write well and read prolifically!

Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #YAlit and #Amwriting

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my Twitter feed. Bookmark this page so you can read them at your leisure.

Just Plain Entertaining and Fun

The imprisoned French cat Henri chronicles his captivity. http://youtu.be/Q34z5dCmC4M #cats #funny

Classic Jane Austen with a modern day retelling. Moms, are you doing this to your daughters? The Lizzie Bennet Diaries. http://youtu.be/KisuGP2lcPs #classiclit #yalit #janeausten

Writing Inspiration/Motivation
Learn the Craft of Writing

7 Setting Basics to Bring a Story to Life. Post by @jodyhedlund http://tinyurl.com/7zgor4q #amwriting #writetips

Writing Contests and Markets
Agents and Editors
Social Media Tips

Write well and read prolifically!

Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #Writing, #Amwriting and #Teaching

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my @suzannelilly Twitter feed. Bookmark this page and you can read them at your leisure.

Writing Inspiration/Motivation

Tips about tools for writing that you have right now. http://t.co/hAaaPfuD #writetips

6 types of book titles that get noticed. Fun read & memorable titles! http://goo.gl/525F6 #amwriting #YAlit #MGlit

Pushing Yourself to be Better, interview of @aswinn at Writer Unboxed. Great info! http://tinyurl.com/6ud9m55 #writetips

Staying Flexible. (Not as in yoga, as in writing.) blog.janicehardy.com/2012/04/guest-author-delilah-s-dawson-better.html

Learn the Craft of Writing

Playing with Chronology in the Written Narrative by @wordstrumpet. #amwriting #writetips http://tinyurl.com/6vhjsot

Why Writing the End is No End at All on the Romance & Beyond blog. http://goo.gl/eFISz #amwriting #fiction

4 tips to add a new twist to a tired old plot. http://tinyurl.com/77o6kfb  by @Janice_Hardy #amwriting #writetips

Can’t figure out what genre your book fits into? Check out this list by @Janice_Hardy http://goo.gl/aEjcR #amwriting #writetips

Great article: Beyond the Cliche, How to Create Characters that Fascinate http://tinyurl.com/89wxokt #writetips #amwriting

How to be Subtle with Subtext. Post at QueryTracker by @StinaLL . http://goo.gl/LuR7U #amwriting #writetips

Teaching Writing Tips

Remember these rules about subject-verb agreement. Post by @Yukongraham http://tinyurl.com/d6oxmm3 #writetips #teaching

Social Media Tips

What are the proven best times to promote your books? http://tinyurl.com/6osvha6 #pubtips #writetips

Write well and write prolifically, my friends!

Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #Writing and #Amwriting

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my @suzannelilly Twitter feed. Bookmark this page so you can read them at your leisure.

Writing Inspiration/Motivation

In a quandary over character names? Here are some NOT to use. Funny article at the Sportsjim81 blog. sportsjim81. http://goo.gl/iVO67

Don’t panic and lose sight of your publishing goal. http://tinyurl.com/8xz3jqx @victoriamixon #amwriting #inspiration

Are you gullible enough to write stories? http://goo.gl/bs2N1 Blog by @dirtywhitecandy #amwriting #fiction

Watch for moments of transcendence, post by @gretchenrubin http://tinyurl.com/8y4onug #happiness #inspiration

Tips about tools for writing that you have right now. http://tinyurl.com/82oqn7w #writetips

Learn the Craft of Writing

Short, sweet, and to the point. 5 important writing tips. http://tinyurl.com/84y9ysn @writingsisters #writetips #amwriting

Sentence parallelism. What it is, and why it’s important to teachers and writers. http://goo.gl/syJdP #writetips #amwriting #teaching

Some fab writers worksheets for scene, character, synopsis and more. http://tinyurl.com/6m3jfva #amwriting #writetips

Don’t write what you know. Write what you don’t know. Post at Writer Unboxed by @jaelmchenry http://tinyurl.com/72embhy #amwriting

How to squeeze backstory into your writing without the infodump. http://tinyurl.com/8xyf693 Advice from @Janice_Hardy #writetips

2 rules for expert suspension of disbelief, or make your readers believe anything. http://tinyurl.com/7uxyk2e  Post by @Ava_Jae #writetips

What makes a good story idea? Find out from Donald Maas. http://tinyurl.com/764dytu #writetips #amwriting

Writing For Young Adult and Middle Grade Readers

To #%&* or Not to #%&*: profanity in middle grade fiction. http://tinyurl.com/6sumwkw #mglit #kitlit #amwriting

Make something fresh out of the 36 dramatic situations. http://goo.gl/Z3qQy Blog post by @4kidlit. #kidlit #mglit #amwriting

Agents and Editors

Rachelle Gardner answers “What’s a Typical Advance?” http://tinyurl.com/738g7mb #askagent #amwriting

Social Media Tips

Open thread for authors at @dearauthor to promote their new books. http://tinyurl.com/7luqr4n #pubtips

Blog by @jodyhedlund reminds us that not all readers use ebooks. Many still love paper. http://tinyurl.com/87m6ml4 #reading #fiction

Teaching Ideas

These are your kids’ brains on fiction. http://tinyurl.com/7bhu6le via@bridgettebooth #kidlit #yalit #mglit

Thomas Edison’s creative thinkering lessons. http://tinyurl.com/6rdy7wk via Psychology Today #teaching #amwriting

Helping children learn how to craft memorable characters. http://tinyurl.com/7j4qkew #teaching #writing #amwriting

Write well and write prolifically, my friends!

Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #Writing and #Amwriting

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my Twitter feed. Bookmark this page so you can read them at your leisure.

Writing Inspiration/Motivation

Do you feel the passion? Perseverance in writing & publishing via Romancing the Blog.  #amwriting

Inspiration: Treat Readers Like Fine Diners. From #Writer Unboxed.

4 ways to hack your mind to be infinitely creative. Blog post from Write to Done.  #writing #fiction #freelance

Learn the Craft of Writing

Looking at the first sequence in a screenplay, and adapting it to novels.  #scriptfrenzy #amwriting

Write a story with 5 easy plot points. Article by Michael Thompson. #writetips #amwriting

Using SCBWI as a writer’s launchpad. Article by Holly Stacey. #kidlit #mglit #YAlit

Gary Paulson’s winning formula. Article by Susie Yakowicz. #mglit #YAlit #amwriting

Some terrific online #YA #fiction resources. Article by Heather Fawcett. #amwriting

Can we predict trends in #YAlit? Some thoughts by Heather Fawcett. #amwriting

To prologue or not to prologue? Advice from Stina Lindenblatt.  #writetips #amwriting #writetip

How to create a niche in your writing via C. Hope Clark.  #writing #amwriting

Writing Contests and Markets

RT @inkyelbows: 2012 Family Circle Fiction Contest. Max 2500 wds. U.S. citizens.Deadline: Sept.7:  (via @anitanolan)

Bust Through Writer’s Block. Advice from James King.  #amwriting #writing #writetips

Agents and Editors

RT @taralazar: New #agent looking to build list: Elizabeth Pomada seeks #picturebooks, MG & YA. #kidlit

Social Media Tips

What do you mean you don’t like me? Social media tip from Chick Swagger.  #socialmedia #amwriting

11 Things I Wish Someone had Told Me About Writing. via @victoriamixon #blogger #amwriting

Write well and write prolifically!