Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #Writing and #Amwriting

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my @suzannelilly Twitter feed. Bookmark this page so you can read them at your leisure.

Writing Inspiration/Motivation

In a quandary over character names? Here are some NOT to use. Funny article at the Sportsjim81 blog. sportsjim81. http://goo.gl/iVO67

Don’t panic and lose sight of your publishing goal. http://tinyurl.com/8xz3jqx @victoriamixon #amwriting #inspiration

Are you gullible enough to write stories? http://goo.gl/bs2N1 Blog by @dirtywhitecandy #amwriting #fiction

Watch for moments of transcendence, post by @gretchenrubin http://tinyurl.com/8y4onug #happiness #inspiration

Tips about tools for writing that you have right now. http://tinyurl.com/82oqn7w #writetips

Learn the Craft of Writing

Short, sweet, and to the point. 5 important writing tips. http://tinyurl.com/84y9ysn @writingsisters #writetips #amwriting

Sentence parallelism. What it is, and why it’s important to teachers and writers. http://goo.gl/syJdP #writetips #amwriting #teaching

Some fab writers worksheets for scene, character, synopsis and more. http://tinyurl.com/6m3jfva #amwriting #writetips

Don’t write what you know. Write what you don’t know. Post at Writer Unboxed by @jaelmchenry http://tinyurl.com/72embhy #amwriting

How to squeeze backstory into your writing without the infodump. http://tinyurl.com/8xyf693 Advice from @Janice_Hardy #writetips

2 rules for expert suspension of disbelief, or make your readers believe anything. http://tinyurl.com/7uxyk2e  Post by @Ava_Jae #writetips

What makes a good story idea? Find out from Donald Maas. http://tinyurl.com/764dytu #writetips #amwriting

Writing For Young Adult and Middle Grade Readers

To #%&* or Not to #%&*: profanity in middle grade fiction. http://tinyurl.com/6sumwkw #mglit #kitlit #amwriting

Make something fresh out of the 36 dramatic situations. http://goo.gl/Z3qQy Blog post by @4kidlit. #kidlit #mglit #amwriting

Agents and Editors

Rachelle Gardner answers “What’s a Typical Advance?” http://tinyurl.com/738g7mb #askagent #amwriting

Social Media Tips

Open thread for authors at @dearauthor to promote their new books. http://tinyurl.com/7luqr4n #pubtips

Blog by @jodyhedlund reminds us that not all readers use ebooks. Many still love paper. http://tinyurl.com/87m6ml4 #reading #fiction

Teaching Ideas

These are your kids’ brains on fiction. http://tinyurl.com/7bhu6le via@bridgettebooth #kidlit #yalit #mglit

Thomas Edison’s creative thinkering lessons. http://tinyurl.com/6rdy7wk via Psychology Today #teaching #amwriting

Helping children learn how to craft memorable characters. http://tinyurl.com/7j4qkew #teaching #writing #amwriting

Write well and write prolifically, my friends!

Interview with Jennifer Anderson, Author of Ice Princess

Jennifer_Anderson_AuthorToday as part of my Writers’ Inspiration Series, the wonderful Jennifer Anderson, author, mother, and wizard of words has agreed to be my guest.

First off, thank you so much for having me Suzanne. I love what you’ve done with the place

*looks around* *nods*!

You’re too funny, Jennifer! Please tell us a little about yourself. What types of things do you write?

My name is Jennifer Anderson and I typically write YA. Besides my love of reading YA, I’m not sure what else drew me to this genre. Maybe it has to do with my own love of high school.  My experience wasn’t terrible and I missed it when I graduated. But I’m all grown up and venturing out into the writing world.

Do you have a schedule for writing?

Funny you should ask about my schedule. A month or so ago, I blogged about being a Writing Vampire. For some reason, my creative juices flowed after the sun set. Since then, my day job has changed. I went from working approximately 40 hours a week to only 20 with Fridays off. So now that I’m alive during the day, I’m making myself write. However, I still find it easier at night.

Do you have any writing rituals, such as music, food, clothes, or anything else to help you?

The most important thing I need is food. I don’t know what it is about eating and writing but I need to have something ready to shove in my mouth. In the morning and mid afternoon, I like to have a cup of coffee while at night I prefer tea. I think it’s the warmth of the beverage I enjoy. Clothing is optional (teehee) but I do like to have my iPod playing.  I know others prefer silence but when I’m working on a tough scene, my music choice is important.  Sometimes I find my groove with Taylor Swift or I might blast the Twilight soundtrack (the music is very moody.)

Yes, it’s sort of like plotters and pantsers, music writers and no music writers. Could you tell us about your writer’s space?

After Christmas, I asked (when I say asked, I mean I whined) my husband to move a spare desk we stored in the hallway into our extra bedroom. The space is also used as a playroom for our two children which houses a TV, dress ups and games. I cannot tell you how excited I was to get my space. Before, I’d lug my laptop from chair to chair or to my bed and write. I found myself often distracted. Now, in my little space, I can shut the door and zone out. I love it!

I still have to share the space and my son has decided to help me create and display a collection of dinosaurs and Angry Bird erasers. I have to admit. I enjoy their company.

If you notice in the picture, I have an enlarged map of Honey Creek so when I’m writing, I can refer back and drive myself around town!

Jennifer Anderson map of Honey Creek

Jennifer Anderson writers work space

I love the Angry Birds and dinosaurs idea! The enlarged town map is brilliant. Off the topic of writing, what is the zaniest, craziest thing you’ve ever done?

Often after a few cocktails, I find myself foot loose and fancy free. I’m sure I’ve done crazier things but the most recent, and one I’m proud of for some reason is twirling on an exotic dancer pole. Let me back it up a bit. A friend of ours wife threw him a party for his birthday. She rented something called a “Road Pony” to drive us around town. Inside, there were disco lights, black leather couches, a TV and 2 poles. Yes! I’m not joking. So, after a bar stop and many drinks, I took a running start, launched myself at the pool and proceeded to spin around until my butt hit the floor. Luckily, I walked away bruise free with a fun story to tell.

I’d say that qualifies as zany! Do you have anything else you’d like to tell us?

I mentioned earlier how I mainly write YA. Well, I tried my hand at a Sweet Romance and was rewarded for my efforts with inclusion in the Turquoise Morning Press Men in Uniform anthology. The book is full of some of my fellow TMPers with short stories of men in uniforms. It’s a delightful read.

Even better, my debut YA novella, Ice Princess, from the Honey Creek Ohio line releases April 29, 2012 by TMP. I am supper excited about this.

Cover of Ice Princess by Jennifer Anderson

For more information about me and my books, check out my author site at jenandersonauthor.com, my blog at Musings from the Peanut Gallery. For all your Honey Creek news, check out our site Honey Creek Books.

Last of all, what advice would you give to other writers?

Writing can be hard. Trust us, we’ve been there. It doesn’t happen overnight. First, you’ve got to write. You can’t be a writer without a finished product. While you’re writing, get out there and mingle. Join social media sites. Meet people in the writing industry. Next, keep writing. Once you feel you have something special, find someone to beta read it for you. But be prepared. You may have many hours of re-writing ahead of you.

The most important thing to remember is to have faith and trust the group of friends you’ve surrounded yourself with. Having a group of writers to throw ideas and complaints at is important. Eileen Dreyer, a romance writer, once told me the most important thing to have is a support group away from your family and friends. And she’s a NYT Best Selling Author.

Thank you again for having me.

Thank you for doing this interview! I can’t wait to read your debut Ice Princess when it comes out on April 29. Good luck on all your future books!

Jamie Lisa Forbes, Author of Unbroken

Today I’m honored to have as a guest the award-winning author Jamie Lisa Forbes. Her novel, Unbroken, tells the tale of two women in Wyoming living the hard lives of ranchers. Meg Braeburn is raising her son alone while she works as a ranch hand. Gwen Swan is married to a rancher. As the women get to know one another, family histories and problems surface. Friendships are tested, and family relationships are stretched taut.

The writing is realistic and true to the nature of life in rural Wyoming. Harsh winters, endless wind, and dependence on neighbors to survive form the backdrop of this novel. Ms. Forbes writes with a spareness of prose to match the landscape. This book is one that opens a window onto a way of life few people experience.

This debut novel, published in 2010 by Pronghorn Press, won the Women Writers of the West Willa Literary Award. Now I’d like to introduce you to the author.

Cover of Unbroken by Jamie Lisa Forbes

Unbroken by Jamie Lisa Forbes

Hi, Jamie. Please tell us a little about yourself. What inspires you to write?

I was born and raised on a ranch along the Little Laramie River in southeastern Wyoming.   While I had a childhood much like the children I have written about in Unbroken,  I spent a great deal of time reading and I began writing stories and poems almost from the time I learned to write.  From that time forward, I always had a need to write.

That explains how you depicted Wyoming ranch life so accurately. What’s your background? Have you worked on a ranch?

After college and 14 months in Israel, I began my adult career on my family’s ranch in January 1979, one of the worst winters ever in southeastern Wyoming.   Like Meg Braeburn in Unbroken, I did not want to live the traditional ranch wife role.  I wanted to be out working the ranch myself.   I had expected my father to welcome my participation and I was quite surprised, when, of all my family, he was the one who was the most opposed to it.

How interesting. Do you have a schedule for writing?

I do in that sense I block out certain days to write.  As far as scheduling completion of work, or portions of work, I find that impossible to do.  I am a finicky reviser.  I can revise almost indefinitely.

Do you have any writing rituals, such as music, food, clothes, or anything else to help you?

I wish there were aids to help me write.   I once read a quote by Hemingway to the effect that the writing process consists of bashing your head on the keyboard until it bleeds and that coincides with my experience of writing.

Your experience seems to have paid off. What did you do when you found out you received the esteemed Willa Cather award?
Jamie Lisa Forbes with her WILLA Award for Unbroken

Jamie Lisa Forbes with her WILLA Award for Unbroken

I was, and still am, humbled.  As I said in my acceptance speech, in all the years I spent working on Unbroken, I had no idea I would finish it,  much less live to see it published and win the WILLA.

Congratulations on your well-earned award. Off the topic of writing, what is the zaniest, craziest thing you’ve ever done?

I believe that the people who know me well would say that everything I have ever done is zany and crazy.  All of my friends in 1979 thought that with my education and background,  I was crazy to choose a life in ranching.   I have always made the daring choices, the choices that were the least expected.  And I have no regrets.

Do you have anything else you’d like to tell us?

I have been blessed beyond measure in all things, including my writing success.  I am now working on a novel about my new home state, North Carolina, and I hope to write it as well and move  my readers as much as I was able to do with Unbroken.

Last of all, what advice would you give to other writers?

Self- discipline is essential.   Second, seek out a mix of readers, or writers you respect, and listen to what they say about your work.  Before Unbroken was accepted for publication, it was read by a dozen friends and relatives, one published author and one publishing editor.  The last person made the one critique of the novel, which, when I followed her advice, got the novel published.

It goes to show that every opinion counts. Thanks so much for stopping by the blog today, and sharing your thoughts with the readers here. I wish you great success with your future books.

Unbroken, by Jamie Lisa Forbes, Published 2010, Pronghorn Press, ISBN 978-1-932636-61-1

A copy of this book was provided to me for review purposes.

Best Blogs of the Week in #WriteTips, #Writing and #Amwriting

Here are some posts you may have missed this week in my Twitter feed. Bookmark this page so you can read them at your leisure.

Writing Inspiration/Motivation

Do you feel the passion? Perseverance in writing & publishing via Romancing the Blog.  #amwriting

Inspiration: Treat Readers Like Fine Diners. From #Writer Unboxed.

4 ways to hack your mind to be infinitely creative. Blog post from Write to Done.  #writing #fiction #freelance

Learn the Craft of Writing

Looking at the first sequence in a screenplay, and adapting it to novels.  #scriptfrenzy #amwriting

Write a story with 5 easy plot points. Article by Michael Thompson. #writetips #amwriting

Using SCBWI as a writer’s launchpad. Article by Holly Stacey. #kidlit #mglit #YAlit

Gary Paulson’s winning formula. Article by Susie Yakowicz. #mglit #YAlit #amwriting

Some terrific online #YA #fiction resources. Article by Heather Fawcett. #amwriting

Can we predict trends in #YAlit? Some thoughts by Heather Fawcett. #amwriting

To prologue or not to prologue? Advice from Stina Lindenblatt.  #writetips #amwriting #writetip

How to create a niche in your writing via C. Hope Clark.  #writing #amwriting

Writing Contests and Markets

RT @inkyelbows: 2012 Family Circle Fiction Contest. Max 2500 wds. U.S. citizens.Deadline: Sept.7:  (via @anitanolan)

Bust Through Writer’s Block. Advice from James King.  #amwriting #writing #writetips

Agents and Editors

RT @taralazar: New #agent looking to build list: Elizabeth Pomada seeks #picturebooks, MG & YA. #kidlit

Social Media Tips

What do you mean you don’t like me? Social media tip from Chick Swagger.  #socialmedia #amwriting

11 Things I Wish Someone had Told Me About Writing. via @victoriamixon #blogger #amwriting

Write well and write prolifically!

Tips for Writers, How to Write What You See

It’s there. In the upper left corner of the vision in your mind’s eye, the character waits. He’s a patient character, because he wants you to take the time you need to describe him just so. He wants to be described so definitively that all your readers will be able to see him clearly. He doesn’t want to be a ghost or a wisp of thought that changes shape for different people. He wants to be as concrete to them as he is to you.

If your character is still a bit of a ghost to you, sit down for a while and get to know him. Find out all his secrets, all his dreams, everything that makes him tick. Then find out more. You need to know everything about him, because if you don’t, how will you make your character real to your readers?

How Do Writers Bring Characters to Life?

First, they write down everything they know. Then, they think of more things, and write them down too. Perhaps they want the character to have a defining quirk. The author writes one down. Then another and another, until after several ideas, one of them comes to life. You’ll know you’ve hit upon the right ideas when your character becomes unforgettable. Here’s an example:

The old woman hunched over her rusty shopping cart, fishing through the black plastic bags as she stood on the street corner waiting for the red light to change. “Hah!” she yelled triumphantly and raised her hand in front of her face, gripping her prize. She slipped the dentures into the canyon of her  gummy smile and smacked her lips around the porcelain. The streetlight switched to green and she trundled across the intersection, clicking her newly found teeth in rhythm with the shopping cart’s clackety wheels, ignoring the drivers watching her from behind the safety of their windshields.

In this example, you see several things that make this woman memorable. However, the technique used is action showing her quirks, rather than just telling about them. Use action to develop your characters, because as we all know, “actions speak louder than words.” This is just as true in writing as it is in day to day life.

Enjoy your writing!

The Writing Space of Author PJ Sharon

I’m delighted to have as a guest today on the Writing Room Inspiration series, PJ Sharon. I first got to know PJ through the Young Adult Romance Writers of America (YARWA) group. She’s an accomplished author, blogger, and woman of many talents, who always seems to have time to support her fellow writers.

PJ Sharon is author of several independently published, contemporary young adult novels, including HEAVEN IS FOR HEROES. Her stories have garnered several contest finals, including two awards for ON THIN ICE, and a place in the prestigious Valley Forge Romance Writers and the Florida Romance Writers Golden Palm contest for SAVAGE CINDERELLA.

PJSharon_Savage_Cinderella

Writing romantic fiction for the past six years, and following her destiny to write Extraordinary stories of an average teenage life, PJ is a member of  RWA, CTRWA, and YARWA. She is mother to two grown sons and lives with her husband and her dog in the Berkshire Hills of Western MA.

Please tell us a little about yourself. What types of things do you write?

I’m writing young adult fiction these days. My stories are about real teens with real issues who have some serious obstacles to overcome and who learn valuable life lessons to find their “hopefully ever after” ending.

Your stories are truly unique and inspiring. Do you have a schedule for writing?

Oh, I wish I did! These days, I spend far more time on the business end of writing than I do on the actual writing. I’m hoping this is a temporary condition while I’m learning the ropes of Indie-publishing and getting the ball rolling on creating a solid backlist of books. Although I don’t write towards manuscript completion every day, I do consider all the blog writing to be good practice. I creatively write in spurts. If I have a few hours to dedicate to adding to my manuscript, I can easily get a chapter or two written. I don’t have word count goals or anything like that, but once the flood gates are opened, I’m unstoppable, LOL. I do get to the point after a few days where I HAVE to do some writing or I’ll start resenting the “job” of being a published author. I’m just about there this week, and plan to add a few chapters to my WIP on Friday.

Do you have any writing rituals, such as music, food, clothes, or anything else to help you?

I’m not superstitious and I’m more of a roll-up-your-sleeves-and-dig-in kind of girl. It does help me if I get organized first and clear away the extraneous to-do’s on my list so I can stay focused. I try to eliminate distractions and avoid the Internet when I’m in a groove. A cup of English Breakfast tea is always nice, and I’m highly motivated by chocolate.

Ah, you’re a highly organized tea lover. Who or what is your inspiration?

I guess “life” in general is my inspiration. I’ve had such an amazing journey filled with highs and lows that could rival the Andes. I’ve come so far from where I was in life that I now feel compelled to share the lessons I’ve learned along the way. I’ve often wished I’d had books like the ones I’m writing available to me when I was a teenager.  If I can save teens from experiencing half of what I went through, it is effort well spent. At the same time, I think the themes in my books are universal and can hopefully be an inspiration to adult readers as well. I believe that fulfillment comes from giving back and spreading the love. I choose to do that through sharing a message of hope with readers.

Could you tell us about your writer’s space?

I’d love to! Up until recently, I was sitting on my couch working on a laptop. I had pillows behind me, under me, and around me trying to create some semblance of ergonomics. I know! Crazy, right? Being a former PT person and currently a Massage Therapist, I should have known better. My body was paying for it, believe me. I had a dedicated office space upstairs in a corner room, but it was terribly isolating and inconvenient—and not very ergonomically designed either.

So, for Christmas, my husband surprised me. I came home from work one day and he had brought all of my office equipment down from the cubbyhole upstairs, rearranged our living room, and created a fabulous office space right where my old couch used to be!  I now have the perfect setup, including dual screens that are interactive, so I can work on multiple projects and move pages around easily. He added track lighting that works great for adding illumination and soft light, which is better for the eyes than fluorescents. For my birthday, I bought myself a new office chair to complete my ergonomic makeover! The couch? It’s now out on our front porch. I suspect I’ll find my husband napping there on occasion once the weather gets warm. :-)

PJ Sharon at her desk     PJ Sharon at desk side view   PJ Sharon dual monitors

What a great guy he is! Off the topic of writing, what is the zaniest, craziest thing you’ve ever done?

Oh, boy! Do you want a list? I’m a risk taker and I love a challenge. I’m afraid I’ve become a little more conservative (smarter) about physical challenges as I’ve gotten older, but I manage to keep exploring exciting new paths that keep me juiced up about life—such as indie-publishing. :-) As far as zany/crazy endeavors, I once picked up an alligator, had my picture taken with three boa constrictors-one around my neck and one in each hand, and stuck my arm in the mouth of a jaguar. No, I’m not kidding!

PJ Sharon with jaguar

PJ Sharon with Snakes

And you have the pictures to prove it!  You’re obviously not afraid of anything! Do you have anything else you’d like to tell us?

So glad you asked! My latest release, SAVAGE CINDERELLA, is available now on Amazon, and early reviews have been great. Now that I’ve completed that project, and my baby is out in the world, I can dedicate more time to writing the next book. I’m about a quarter of the way through my current work in progress, the first book in a dystopian trilogy, THE CHRONICLES OF LILY CARMICHAEL, due out in July. If I can manage it, I’ll have the second book out in December. In between that, I have a CHRONICLES companion short story that will be part of the October WG2E anthology.

I love the cover for SAVAGE CINDERELLA. Last of all, PJ, what advice would you give to other writers?

Write what you love, believe in yourself, and be bold! You can do anything you set your mind to, and with practice, you can become the writer you were meant to be.

You’re living proof that writing what you love pays off. Thanks so much, PJ.

If you’d like to contact PJ Sharon, here are places to find her and connect with her.

Contact Information for PJ Sharon:

Books by PJ Sharon:

Your turn:

What do you think? Would you be as daring as PJ Sharon and put your arm in a jaguar’s mouth?

Tips for Writers, Specific Details Spell Success

Which passage would you rather read?

  1. The birds crowded around the feeder.
  2. The goldfinches squabbled on the plastic rung, causing the feeder it to swing and spin drunkenly as they battered against one another, until a screeching scrub jay swooped in, forcing the argumentative couple to flee for refuge in a nearby oak tree.

Most people would choose the second passage. Why? It’s a more enjoyable read because it has so many details readers can see a picture of the action. Notice the specific details:

  • Squabbling goldfinches
  • Screeching scrub jay
  • Feeder spinning drunkenly
  • An oak tree

This is a scene that takes place in my backyard every morning and every afternoon. When I talk about it, I simply say the birds fight. But when writing, we need to give the reader much more. The reader chooses to spend time with you as the author, and in return, the reader expects you to paint a vivid picture with your words. I’ve called it making words dance,  or descriptive writing with the five senses.

Write with details and specifics

The success is in the details. That’s what draws the reader to you and keeps him reading. This is true in both fiction and creative nonfiction. We can’t use all five senses in every scene, but it’s helpful to remember all five senses as we write each scene. For example, let’s look at a situation and analyze all five senses.

Your boss just fired you.

  1. Sight – You might notice the mustard stain on his tie from lunch, or the long hairs in his nose.
  2. Sound – You might hear the ping of the elevator doors as they open outside his office, or the laughter of your co-workers outside the door.
  3. Smell – Perhaps you break into a cold sweat and smell your own perspiration. Or is it that of your boss?
  4. Taste – Bile rises in your throat and the acid burns the back of your tongue. Or your mouth goes dry and you taste the sands of the Sahara between your lips.
  5. Feel – The ground wobbles beneath your feet. Your spine feels like rubber and your whole body shakes. You feel the prick of the torn pleather as you sit down in a cold chair across from his desk.

Put your character in the scene and imagine what he or she might see, hear, smell, taste, and feel. Use as much detail as fits the scene.

Use concrete, specific terms in the details

Here’s an example I love from Strunk and White’s The Elements of Style, Fourth Edition, page 21. This book is my writing bible.

“Daissy and I in time found asylum in a small menagerie down by the railroad tracks. It belonged to a gentle ne’er do well, who did nothing all day long but drink bathtub gin in rickeys and play solitaire and smile to himself and talk to his animals. He had a little, stunted red vixen and a deodorized skunk, a parrot from Tahiti that spoke Parisian French…” from “The Zoo” a short story by Jean Stafford.

Notice the definite, specific details. There’s no mistake or misinterpretation because the details paint the picture. The parrot doesn’t just speak French, it speaks Parisian French. The skunk is deodorized. The alcoholic is gentle. This is a story that begs to be read.

Two key points to remember are:

  1. Put your character in the scene and have her experience as many of the five senses as you can.
  2. Use specific, descriptive words and verbs to send the message you intend.
Now you try it:

Let’s say you’re writing a scene which everyone can relate to.

Your character has just woken up, and is late for an important meeting. How would you write the scene?

Please share your masterpiece in the comments, because we can all learn from each other’s writing. Plus, they’ll be fun to read.

Here’s my try:

She bounds out of bed, slamming her fist on the offensive alarm clock, a frantic hippo charging into the closet, bellowing at her husband and children to stay out of her way. She flings clothes over her head, onto the door, the dresser, the floor, hair flying wild in a blizzard of blue and mauve rayon and black wool. She stubs her toe on the wooden door jamb and bellows again as a paroxysm of pain tortures her foot. She hobbles outside to her car cowering in the driveway. As she pulls her bejeweled keychain out of her Coach handbag, she remembers. The BMW is out of gas.